Dark Maiden

Yay!!!! I liked it very much and I have a feeling that the traitor they are looking for is the one at the end. Hurry up and finish the next!! ...

Wow! I loved it and am waiting earnestly to see what happens next... keep up the good work!

Just for all you people to know, this is in the middle of my book, so the reason you don't know my characters that well is because you have had ...

I was assigned to write a descriptive essay in school last year and i won a prize for the best in my class... out of the girls. so, i guess ...

Wow! It was fantastic! I hope there will be more. "I was so utterly fascinated by him that my friend’s whisper failed to penetrate." I especially love that sentence! It ...

Just for y'all to know, there are several mistakes in here that i totally forgot about before i posted. *sobs* so, i apologize and next time i will first edit ...

Chapter One I walked down the halls and I could sense that all through the school, I was being whispered about. My appearance was extremely different from the rest of ...

I always use Internet Explorer and i think mozilla stinks. opera is pretty cool, i gotta admit!

The coolness of the rain felt good on my bare shoulders as I ran through the large park. My hair stuck to my face as the wetness came down in ...

ooooo!!! i want to read the rest! what a grand idea!

wow, ink! i am extremly impressed! fantastic job! i love how you stuck orthodoxy in there...but. okay...you said something like, "i am orthodox, so..." i think it would make more ...

i really like it. there are a couple of parts that are a little hard to understand, but just a couple. overall, it is really fantastic. it feels as though ...

wow! that was amazing! it has great voice and i love it! good job!

cool! i'm meera - the dark maiden. i'm new...